Authors note: now in this novel we are getting somehwere. Some parts are still uncomprehendable but others are showing what happened and why it happened. This story has show the Good vs. Evil and why people do crazy things at times. It is about how they want to be remembered and forgotten. they will not be shown an enemy, for in those times of need they will find help.
In the novel Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, Mr. Utterson and Mr. Guest are very confused by the prolonging dissaperance of their old friend. Dr. Jekyll has been shut up in his house, cut off from the outside world for so long that his friends barely remember him even though they try to visit him weekly. He is a lost soul after Mr. Hyde hid away somewhere with his help. He feels the responsibility and thus the actions to be taken so that he may be safe.
We ourselves are not safe in this world of pain and suffering. Every where around us are things that will drive us to our destruction and things that will give us glory. But we make choices in life that decide how we live and what we live for. For if we do not live for a reason then what is the point of living at all? We are afraid of evil and what it stands for yet what will we do to stand up to it. It is this thought racing through our heads every time we have a sports game or a battle in our life. Will we show the good or the evil that comes out of us.
Nice point of view and relation between the story and life. I like how you point out that this struggle between good and evil occurs in every single detail about our lives. Very well written, despite some missing punctuation.
ReplyDeleteI liked your introduction and how you wrote about life, but maybe you should try to connect them a little bit more and expand it so you can really relate your life paragraph to the novel. I think if you did that, you would have a really deep and professional sounding response. Your word choice and writing is good, though. Good job.(:
ReplyDeleteGood Job! You are so right about the effect of the choices we make in life...that bit really did add a lot. I do tend to agree with Leah, you set an excellent base but there is so much more you could do with it. Nice use of diction as well.
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